A Sense of Online Urgency

I read this in today’s BtoB Daily News Alert.

A new survey found that nearly half of B2B marketing budgets are spent on online tactics such as website development, online advertising, search marketing, webcasts and social media.

The survey was conducted by Hearst Electronics Group and Goldstein Group.

“The sense of urgency to move to online marketing has been felt by leading marketing organizations for some time now, but the extent to which budgets have been redefined is dramatic,” Joel Goldstein, president of Goldstein Group, was quoted as saying.

It’s a bit like the Oklahoma Land Rush of 1889. More and more are staking their claim in the vast online world.

Favor Simple Words

In my free report, “66 Proven Tips for Writing Copy That Sells,” this tip is among my favorites:

28. Use simple words.

I believe this is one of the all-time best copywriting tips. Simple words make copy clear and lean. Simple words communicate quickly.

Unfortunately, people often ignore this tip, which is why business communications say …

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Avoid One-Size-Fits-All Messaging

“All-purpose ads serve all purposes poorly,” columnist Bob Donath once wrote in Marketing News.

The columnist cited a technology company marketing director who produced a slick new ad campaign designed to increase inquiries and Web site traffic. The ads — with identical headlines and copy — were placed in three different trade publications.

As you might guess, the campaign didn’t increase response.

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12 Famous Companies That Started During a Recession

Consider this a pep talk. Recessions are bad, but success is possible.

Following are 12 businesses that began when the economy was in the toilet. (Well, well — look at them now.)

Hyatt
CNN
Burger King
IHOP
FedEx
Microsoft
Trader Joe’s
Sports Illustrated
GE
The Jim Henson Company
MTV Networks
Hewlett-Packard

Go here for the full scoop.

Too Many Ideas Syndrome

I read about Too Many Ideas Syndrome (TMIS) in a special creativity issue of Writer’s Digest.

“You don’t hear much about TMIS because complaining about being too creative is like complaining about being on The New York Times bestseller list too often,” wrote Leigh Anne Jasheway-Bryant.

Still, anyone who has felt paralyzed by having too many ideas (including questionable or just plain bad ones) can relate to the concept. I know I can.

Actually, having a lot of ideas is good. It beats the alternative. But whether you’re writing an ad, article, or book, you have to choose an idea and move out. Commitment is a scary thing.

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The Soul of Advertising

“Whatever is common is despised. Advertisements are now so numerous that they are very negligently perused, and it is therefore become necessary to gain attention by magnificence of promises, and by eloquence sometimes sublime and sometimes pathetic.”

Englishman Samuel Johnson wrote the above words in his magazine, The Idler, on January 20, 1759. And yet it could have been written yesterday.

Then Johnson wrote, “Promise, large promise, is the soul of an advertisement,”

Johnson’s quote got me thinking about advertising — both its promise and pitfalls.

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A Marketing Lesson from a Hot Dog Man

A man who lived by the roadside and sold hot dogs had trouble hearing, so he didn’t have a radio. His eyesight was poor, so he didn’t read newspapers.

But he sold hot dogs in bunches along the highway. He put up signs to advertise and solicited passersby with cries of “Buy a hot dog? Buy a hot dog?”

And people bought the man’s hot dogs. So many, in fact, that he increased his orders for hot dogs and buns. Then he got his son to return home from another city to help out.

“Haven’t you been listening to the news?” the son asked his father. “Haven’t you read the newspapers?”

There’s a world recession, the son told his father. There’s a war. People are losing their jobs.

So the father decreased his orders. He took down his signs. Sales immediately dropped.

“You’re right, son. We’re in a recession,” said the hot dog man.

(A version of this story was posted by Tony Gattari of Achievers Group on LinkedIn.)

Bulldog Marketing

I saw this over at MarketingProf’s Daily Fix. The Gonzaga Bulldogs Women’s basketball team has a clever interactive campaign. The headline:

COACH GRAVES AND THE BULLDOGS REALLY NEED YOUR HELP.

Go to InspiredSeason.com and follow the directions.

(Note: Be sure to enter the number for the phone that’s within reach.)

As Nike says, just do it. You’ll get the full marketing effect. It’s well worth it.

Write with Abandon

A friend of mine leads seminars that help journalists write better stories.

In one exercise, he has journalists choose a topic and then write about it for 10 minutes. There are two rules:

1. No stopping.
2. No editing.

Many are surprised by the quantity and quality of their words.

Try it. Write with abandon. Handcuff the editor within. You may be surprised, too.

Everyone Has ‘Proven Track Record’

Everyone has a “proven track record.” Or so it seems. I do, and I’m not an Olympic sprinter or a NASCAR driver.

“Proven track record” is one of those tired phrases that virtually everyone uses. I plead guilty. As a copywriter, I’ve surely drafted those words dozens of times for marketing materials.

Actually, I’m fond of the word “proven,” but when it’s combined with “track record” eyes glaze over. In fact, those three words just popped up in an article I was reading in BtoB’s Best 2008, which is why I’m writing this post.

Any suggested alternatives? “Proven track record” returns 3.84 million results in Google. Maybe we can start to whittle away at this cliché.

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